Wednesday, February 15, 2012

edgar

The air rushed past at incredible speeds as Edgar hurtled from the airplane. Adrenaline coursing through his veins and a broad smile on his face. Truly there is no other feeling like skydiving, nothing that could grant such a rush as free fall from thousands of feet in the air, but like all good things it must come to an end so he pulled his cord for the parachute, but nothing happened, so he pulled his backup one, still nothing. he succumbs to panic as the ground reaches up to meet him. oh wait never mind, there it goes. His parachute unfurls and he comes in for a landing on the surface of mars to get a coffe at the mars Starbucks. mars was a lot like earth now that its been teraformed, but with slightly less gravity. making for even better skydiving. after his coffe he went home and watched tv for a few hours before going to bed.

1 comment:

  1. Good job Grace. I will continue to tell you time and time again though. Re-read for mistakes, typos, and ALWAYS check your grammar! It is so important. You are a senior. You should know where to use a capital letter.

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